Writing : Engaging begging

In Room 21 this week we have been working on making engaging beginnings for our scifi narrative writing. We have practiced six diffrent types of beginnings to keep our writing entertaining. Here are some examples of how to do it.

Exclamation :     

• The Boy Tom goes to the shop angry until someone says hows your day Tom didn't like that

Question :

• Tom was going to the shops angry. But why was he angry?

Intro character : 

• As Tom was eating his pet kobe comes to eat his dinner to.

Dialogue : You little Boy come back here with my ticket or else you will pay for that ticket said Tom.

Flashback: After chasing that boy he got his ticket. Earlier that day tom went back to the lucky dip.

Action : As Tom Won 1 million dollars he jumped and touched the sky but everybody said nooo but tom said yes